【岁末文艺赛】《Ideal Friend》《理想的朋友》

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《Ideal Friend》
by CBA7

he/she is in a corner of this world
near or far
not in an ideal world
but he/she is an ideal friend
brings rainbows in rainy days
silent in sunny days

《理想的朋友》
by CBA7

他/她在这个世界的一个角落里
或近或远
不在理想的世界里
但他/她是一个理想的朋友
雨天带来彩虹
晴天沉默

P.S. This poem was inspired by Ray Cope, a British poet, and his poem Ideal World below

Ideal World.
by Ray cope

In an ideal world-------
I'm in a cottage by a lake.
A cottage,nestling against woodland.
I'm clad in denim.
I'm shod in wellington boots.
I'm tending a garden:
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] by my side.
And a wise old cat who lurks in the hedgerow.
I'm stooping amidst flowers.
Grubbing happily in the loam.
Contented:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a canoe, gaily painted.
Out in the water.
A sharp - edged craft of native American ilk.
I'm watching fish rise.
I watch the wild duck bobbing.
I catch the sun on my paddle,
as i glide silently by.
Through water-lilies,through rushes.
Sometimes drifting with the breeze.
Unconcerned:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a forest,bathed in dappled shadows.
I'm rustling through leaf litter.
I'm snapping twigs underfoot.
I'm listening to birdsong.
And the scamperings of small things.
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] roving ahead of me.
I am in awe of the greenness.
I am the watcher of bees.
I am brother to The Green Man.
Fortunate am i:
【Ray's poem was published on Allpoetry, the largest and best poetry site in the world】


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才女! -lovecat08- 给 lovecat08 发送悄悄话 lovecat08 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 07:32:35

过奖了,谢谢爱猫的鼓励! -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 08:38:19

美的遐想。。。 -梧桐之丘- 给 梧桐之丘 发送悄悄话 梧桐之丘 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 07:47:28

理想的朋友会带给我们美的遐想 :) 谢谢梧桐版主的点评。 -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 08:40:41

采菊东篱下,把酒话桑麻。好久不见7妹 -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 08:46:58

哈哈哈,7妹忙着看世界杯呢 :) -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 09:46:13

想不到哈。赞一个。另外请7妹多参加活动,为邻兄捧场 -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 09:56:13

哈哈哈,7妹是假球迷,每4年才看一次球 :) 为邻兄捧场,没问题,这不是赶在摩法大战之前来参加活动了吗 :) -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 10:15:43

邻兄安排任务:7妹再参加活动>=3次 :-) -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (483 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 16:30:29

角落很流行文题 -望沙- 给 望沙 发送悄悄话 望沙 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 10:44:51

谢谢沙沙的点评 -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 12:04:51

好诗!我想打着雨伞追着她一起看雨霁彩虹~~ -烟酒嗓- 给 烟酒嗓 发送悄悄话 烟酒嗓 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 13:01:55

好浪漫!谢谢诗人歌星的光临和鼓励。 -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 19:48:45

理想的世界只存在于理想中,理想的他和她更加美好 -浮云驰- 给 浮云驰 发送悄悄话 浮云驰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 13:16:07

浮云的解读很到位啊,谢谢浮云版主!理想的世界在现实中是不存在的,但是现实中会有理想的朋友 :) -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 19:52:00

在理想的世界、遇到理想的朋友。。。 -紫若蓝- 给 紫若蓝 发送悄悄话 紫若蓝 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 16:16:43

那就最理想了 :) 谢谢若蓝的点评。 -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 19:53:10

在友谊中寻得理想,在理想中寻得友谊。 -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/15/2022 postreply 18:43:52

很美好的感悟,谢谢秋兰分享。 -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/15/2022 postreply 19:56:39

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