Palindrome 不知所云

Palindrome

A carriage picked me up in 1881
Its chauffeur didn't ask my destination
nor did he have navigation
He just steered the carriage towards 1:30 o'clock
constantly
as if that were the only guidance of our journey
We started at the street NOON
its sign translucent
I fell asleep because of my surroundings' silence
and counted the streets we passed in my dream
The chauffeur waked me up at an intersection
He pointed at a street sign barely visible on the lamp post
Sir, your stop, on time
NOON street at midnight in 2112

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Nunoftferreira - Good poetic exercise and nice piece of poetry you have crafted and shared with a very nice flow

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• 好诗，云所不知。 -冯墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 20:14:33

• 谢谢墟兄！留言妙极了！ -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 20:19:39

• 夜半诗人。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 21:15:18

• 又说，怎不译中？ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 21:16:02

• 夜半版主。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 21:54:25

• 谢谢喵，夜半版主，我一会贴一个谷歌版 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:54:44

• 时间穿越啊 -浮云驰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 00:41:17

• 是啊，人性，不从历史学，就会穿越，天朝是马上就回到文革了 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:56:25

• 可惜历史是螺旋上升，旋回去的过程很疼啊 -浮云驰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 12:52:09

• 看来需要背景知识才能懂。有Hotel California的感觉，或者是，Johny Depp的感觉。赞。 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 00:58:14

• Johny Depp和老婆在我们这打官司。。。。。。。。。。。。。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 03:48:15

• 谢谢，为啥 johny depp? -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:56:50

• 从1990年剪刀手爱德华开始，Depp演了断头谷，理发师陶德，独行侠，风格暗黑灵幻，此外 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (178 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 17:17:04

• 灵兄是影视百科全书啊 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 19:40:47

• running back again:) -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 06:37:00

• 谢谢绿 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:57:08

• Noon,；1:30;midnight 2112.。。不知道拽到什么地方去了，好玄。 -梧桐之丘- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 06:49:57

• 瞎转弯 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:57:28

• It took 231 years to get there, the starting point :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 07:21:01

• 谢谢7，数学真好 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:57:42

• 想到了冰心94岁时写的《我的家在哪里》，说她做了一个梦，梦见坐“洋车”去中剪子巷，那里是她灵魂深处的家。 -七斓- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 10:13:44

• 还真是 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 19:41:31