Two shadows 更多的影子

Two shadows

Two shadows
lie perpendicular
impossible
only one visible

Two shadows
one from birth
one from death

Two shadows
one from hell
one from heaven

Tow shadows
the sun and the moon
to the finish line
Is there a shrine

© 8 hours ago
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Likes: Jeff Kaminski, Dark Migration, Alice G

Alice G - I love your style, and the poem made me really think. I love it!

3 hours ago 

Jeff Kaminski - i like the imagery present throughout this piece, and the rhythm of it

 

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• 一影颤，不如两影颤。：） -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 16:44:53

• 灵！ -梧桐之丘- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 17:22:49

• 谢谢 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 19:17:47

• 谢谢！对极了！ -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 19:17:35

• 颤音与shadows杠上了。写得很入味 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 16:45:38

• 谢谢邻兄！眼里只有影子 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 19:18:28

• 真是跟shadow 玩儿上了啊。：）颤音的眼神厉害，这首诗里面的shadow 一半我都没见过。。。：） -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 17:23:21

• 谢谢无忧！梦里啥都能看见！ -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 19:19:04

• Profound sense -LittleEasy- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 17:30:17

• 谢谢easy！ -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 19:19:20

• great imagination:) -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 19:12:00

• 谢谢绿 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 19:19:31

• 有人看出了最后是 TOW 而不是 TWO shadows 了吗？哈哈哈 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 19:30:40

• 确实没有，只顾跟你颤，眼也颤花了。 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/17/2022 postreply 19:46:12