Twin chimneys 留言出乎意料

Twin chimneys

Twin chimneys spike into the night sky
Rises from them
not smoke
but truth
burnt by the environmental doctrines

© 6 hours ago

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Likes: Orense, Dragos G

Dragos G - Damn this poem is brutal, the last line hit like a gut punch, haven't gotten such a powerful reaction from a poem as to physically move me in a long while

Great poem

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• 赞 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 11:15:17

• 谢谢邻兄 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:34:11

• 哈，这留言是挺出乎意料的。。。：） -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 12:04:18

• 是个teenager，激情满出来了，哈哈哈 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:34:51

• 你这首写的很好。结尾有惊讶。而且耐人寻味可多重理解。 -影云- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 12:45:13

• 谢谢影云 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:35:13

• 我知道我知道，是teenager。哈哈，我闪先，别打人。 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 17:03:32

• 哈哈哈，你也像我，到处乱逛 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:35:46

• 您找Dragos G聊聊：） -西东人8- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 17:09:19

• 有代沟，哈哈哈 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:36:05

• Less is more -LittleEasy- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 17:37:05

• 谢谢 easy -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:36:20

• A very nice and sharp piece! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:55:23

• 原来你是这个烟囱，他是那个。圣诞老人来你家的时候，爬哪个？？ -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/06/2022 postreply 06:59:25