One roll of Forever Stamps

One roll of Forever Stamps

One roll of Forever Stamps
One pile of blank envelopes
One ream of pale-yellow paper
One dried-up fountain pen
lying on a dusty desk
and waiting
in the ebbing sunlight
in an abandoned room
where a moth flies

© 3 days ago

 
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Likes: Oxymore, Jørgensen

Oxymore - I love this, youve got quite a handle on the aspect of brevity in your work, which is always a good thing!

Keep writing

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• 赞，我也觉得颤音用词简洁，擅长描述，而且心思细微极了。。。：） -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 05:27:22

• 谢谢！我偏好简洁 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 20:06:28

• 早赞 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 05:41:05

• 没有shadow，多了moth。不颤也赞。：）把sunlight也去掉，加上fire， -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (69 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 05:48:09

• 嘘，别吵。。。别打扰人家颤音静静地深情着。。。：） -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 06:12:38

• 忧君辛苦了，一大早跟孵蛋似的照顾各位。：） -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (51 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 06:24:01

• 噗。。。可以换个比喻事物吗？：） -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 06:36:08

• moth 是被 Virginia Woolf 写的 moth 影响了 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 20:07:30

• 好！要我写的话，最后一句会写成 -nearby- ♂ (246 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 10:16:27

• LOL -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 10:39:50

• 求表扬 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 10:42:18

• 奖励dead moth 一枚。。。。。：） -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 10:44:33

• 表扬+1。赞花心女。 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 18:23:13

• 谢谢！好主意 ：-） -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 20:08:03

• 好像知道你为什么喜欢写诗了 -七斓- ♀ (48 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 11:49:33

• 可能啊，哈哈哈 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/04/2022 postreply 20:08:40