Between you and me 两首

Between you and me


Between you and me
lies our puppy
He barks and snores, but doesn't talk
Yet, he understands you
He understands me
So, do I understand you

Between you and me
stands a screen
playing a silent movie
I don't understand
Neither do I, you say
So, do you understand me


© 9 days ago, love   
 

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Lindsay V - This made me smile. I feel the same way about my doggos. They bring us together

Lovely write

9 days ago 

 

Between you and me


Me thirty years ago
singing a thirty-year-old song
singing the errors that I know now
And the river that floats errors
winding and long
My song
your laughter
still flowing in the yellowed photo
The mirror behind us and the flash of the camera
cast the light that separates you from me


© 3 years ago,  love   
 
 

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- Really cool poem about time separating one from the people and memories of yesterday!

3 years ago

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第一首巧妙,第一首美而伤感 -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 08:01:45

谢谢无忧,你本意第二首伤感?第一首如果回答是 no,可能也伤感 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 09:09:15

嗯,好吧,我单纯了,想都没想就觉得答案是Yes。。。 -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 10:28:10

Interesting poems. I see love Between you and me :) -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 08:10:51

thanks 7! -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 09:07:53

有点时空错乱的感觉。。 小狗会游泳吗? -kirn- 给 kirn 发送悄悄话 kirn 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 08:36:12

狗刨的出处? -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 09:07:35

中文的也不错! -lovecat08- 给 lovecat08 发送悄悄话 lovecat08 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 09:31:44

The puppy must have been thirty years old.... -kirn- 给 kirn 发送悄悄话 kirn 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 17:00:09

第一首有两句与无忧昨天的诗有异曲同工 :-) -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 09:31:22

哪两句? -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 10:37:53

同问,荣幸 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 14:50:26

See inside, it is 3. BTW, don't take it seriously -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (986 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 15:03:50

哈哈,我找了找,也只能是这里了。。。邻兄看来跟我一样乐观,颤音说这里的答案是No。。。 -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 16:05:28

哈哈哈,我还是啰嗦多了,花了三行字 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2022 postreply 21:14:01

:) -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2022 postreply 05:53:49

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