Slanted light on a shrine in the wall

Slanted light on a shrine in the wall

A shrine in a wall
silent and worn
ignored by a nomad
who leans on the wall and dozes at dusk
But the dying sunlight
pulled and slanted by the shrine
shines on the shrine and his face

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Iffat Yasmin - Good write painting a mysterious picture, had to imagine the scene to enjoy the write the last 2 lines bring the whole picture to life making it meaningful

Clever piece

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• 读了好几遍。。。喜欢这味道，读出了一种宁静。你有没有把昨天的中文诗译成英文来读读？：） -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2022 postreply 17:00:09

• 谢谢啊！昨天的倒是先写的英文，翻成中文基本是谷歌，英文我找到贴过来 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2022 postreply 21:25:23

• 这首也中译吧！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2022 postreply 18:24:42

• 才子发来的都是刚出炉的新鲜创作。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2022 postreply 18:25:59

• 谢谢猫！我去找谷歌帮忙 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2022 postreply 21:25:59

• 赶快把珍珠摆上来朝奉。。。哈哈，立刻闪闪发光 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2022 postreply 19:09:00

• A brilliant idea -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2022 postreply 21:26:21

• quite some flavors -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2022 postreply 19:20:08

• 谢谢近兄 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2022 postreply 21:26:42

• Sunlight 是激动人心的 -浮云驰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2022 postreply 00:56:45