Shell

Shell

What's inside a shell
Heaven or hell
Flesh or soul
Fold and roll
Swirl and twirl
till the birth of a pearl

vague © 5 hours ago

Likes: OpenLeapling, shdpoems

OpenLeapling - Lovely rhyme. So much pressure was put into that shell. How long does it take to get that pearl to come forth? Yes, at the start of it all what was first put into the shell to transform into "a pearl"

Nicely penned

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• Lovely rhyme.：）好问题，必须都具备吧，heaven and hell, flesh and soul... -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 16:51:16

• 谢谢，也许，大杂烩 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:36:05

• 必须大杂烩啊，那样炼出的才是真珍珠。：）颤音不写中文诗了吗？我很喜欢你写的中文诗的味道。。。 -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:42:22

• 谢谢！好像没有什么感觉，书看少了 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 21:03:23

• 都研究英文去了。。。 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2022 postreply 05:26:08

• 5小时前写的，好诗！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:16:42

• 特新鲜！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:16:58

• 赞！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:35:35

• 谢谢猫 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2022 postreply 17:36:21

• 很富想象力！A beautiful and meaningful piece. Love it! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2022 postreply 04:47:17

• very nice! -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2022 postreply 05:14:33

• Till chanyin's reveal Till people can tell. Hahahah -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2022 postreply 05:23:04