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先写了中文,再英文,加了点

尘埃

 

窄窄的深巷

孤零零的老茶坊

晚春的残阳

透过斑驳的木窗

伴着尘埃彷徨

 

月弯躲进了云端

梦的门窗紧关

拥着深巷的孤单

清风拂过屋檐

不曾听到尘埃的呼喊

 

Dust


In a slender and willow-lined alley
hides a lonely old tea house
A trace of the sun in late spring
squeezes through the mottled wooden windows
and lights up the wandering dust
who's daydreaming a fireworks-filled night

The crescent moon is hiding in the clouds
and shuts tightly the doors and windows of dreams
Embracing loneliness of the deep alley
a breeze whisks beyond the eaves
and never hears the dust's bellow
that's as silent as its mother, soil


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Likes: kevin, ChrisW, Sand Singer, AP YouxiaHaikusaur, Cosmic Quill, kaye, Samara, Hans Ostrom, Lyrical Dove, Being.nathan, Miri Anna, ANA614, Navah the Buddaphliii, Teri3, SumdudenametoneTo reply, click a comment.

AP YouxiaHaikusaur - thus the legacy of the beauty and the dust of the nature's legacy

Nice write3 months ago   

Lyrical Dove - This is really beautiful! I love the scenery! I can absolutely understand the feeling of tiny things going unheard/unnoticed! Beautiful! Lovely! 

 

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虽然没太看懂,但咱 也赞了:) -西东人8- 给 西东人8 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/17/2022 postreply 10:03:35

谢谢西东兄!问好!码字,没啥含义在里面 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/17/2022 postreply 12:01:15

赞,还是中文简洁啊。。。:) -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/17/2022 postreply 11:49:09

谢谢!是顺口溜 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/17/2022 postreply 12:01:35

押韵太多,是有点滑的感觉,少几个可能效果会更好。。。也不会影响意境 -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/17/2022 postreply 13:31:30

喜欢最后两句英文。 -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/17/2022 postreply 12:08:50

更喜欢第一段,一个静谧的画面,只有尘埃上下浮动 -浮云驰- 给 浮云驰 发送悄悄话 浮云驰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/18/2022 postreply 00:27:20

啧啧,我只看得懂中文,看不懂英文。。。回去恶补英文去 -kirn- 给 kirn 发送悄悄话 kirn 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/18/2022 postreply 08:19:00

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