shadow of love

喜欢影子,看照片,经常留意影子,最近看到2张,就码了几行字。

Whose shadow on your closed eyes


Whose shadow on your closed eyes
Not mine
You said
It's the joy we shared
but never said


past © a day ago
 

Likes: Jeremiah, Sumdudenametone

Jeremiah - This is the best thing I've read all day. I too love those times. prefer them, actually

Nicely written!

 

Shadow of your hairs


Shadow of your hairs
floats in my heart
tingling


© a day ago, 
 

Likes: Ken doll, Mike-musings

Mike-musings - I sort of expected more. Great heading, and its what drew me in, but then I was left hanging. Good work though.

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很浪漫很甜蜜。。。 -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2022 postreply 19:22:34

有点赞同第二个评论。不过这个的确见仁见智,有人就喜欢这样戛然而止。。。不知道到底哪种更好点。 -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2022 postreply 19:26:24

谢谢,我是懒 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/16/2022 postreply 11:40:11

Both shadows are so sweet and romantic, love it! -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2022 postreply 20:13:42

谢谢 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/16/2022 postreply 11:41:15

Enjoy -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2022 postreply 21:52:46

谢谢 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/16/2022 postreply 11:41:28

第一句很有味道 -浮云驰- 给 浮云驰 发送悄悄话 浮云驰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/16/2022 postreply 03:02:59

谢谢 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/16/2022 postreply 11:39:46

和! -kirn- 给 kirn 发送悄悄话 kirn 的博客首页 (331 bytes) () 07/16/2022 postreply 09:56:39

妙!太伤感了,哈哈哈哈 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/16/2022 postreply 11:39:32

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