你这是常说的那种“双脚踩在泥里”写出来的文章，很有获奖作品的感觉啦，改成英文投去试试吧？

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• 我又去学习了高妹的获奖文学炮制大法，觉得差距还是巨大滴LOL 谢谢高妹！ -可能成功的P- ♀ (88 bytes) () 06/12/2022 postreply 22:25:00

• I believe there are two ways of writing novels. One is mine, -FionaRawson- ♀ (491 bytes) () 06/12/2022 postreply 22:31:54

• I wish I could have a bit of both :) I know, too ambitious. -可能成功的P- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/13/2022 postreply 09:30:35