许渊冲先生的翻译
Returning Home
Young,I left home and not till old do I come back,(倒装)
Unchanged is my accent,yet my hair no longer black.
The children whom I meet on the way don't know me,
''Where are you from,sir''they smile and ask with glee.
许渊冲先生的翻译
Returning Home
Young,I left home and not till old do I come back,(倒装)
Unchanged is my accent,yet my hair no longer black.
The children whom I meet on the way don't know me,
''Where are you from,sir''they smile and ask with glee.
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许先生的版本没有任何问题。您是想说明什么?您借鉴了许先生的手法?老一代的翻译踏实,像您这样完全不着调。
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08/22/2021 postreply
09:22:54
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没说借鉴大师的,让您看一下而已。我稍微改了一下,望再不吝赐教。
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08/22/2021 postreply
09:27:10
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我根本没资格教英语。但是我看到这样的原品,和这样的译本,心里很难过。您这算有心宣扬唐宋文化?
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08/22/2021 postreply
12:02:15
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努力接近诗人原意吧。
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08/22/2021 postreply
15:13:13