几年前第一次学翻译，试用《满江红》：The Road Not Taken by R. Frost被告知需要用平仄

The Road Not Taken 

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BY ROBERT FROST

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,

And sorry I could not travel both

And be one traveler, long I stood

And looked down one as far as I could

To where it bent in the undergrowth;

 

Then took the other, as just as fair,

And having perhaps the better claim,

Because it was grassy and wanted wear;

Though as for that the passing there

Had worn them really about the same,

 

And both that morning equally lay

In leaves no step had trodden black.

Oh, I kept the first for another day!

Yet knowing how way leads on to way,

I doubted if I should ever come back.

 

I shall be telling this with a sigh

Somewhere ages and ages hence:

Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—

I took the one less traveled by,

And that has made all the difference.

 

秋染叶黄，林深处，两路茫茫。伫立久，抬眼远望，取舍难抉。

 

 寂寂青山藏幽径，悠悠长路伴我行。人踪灭，荒草萋萋间，孤影孓。  

 

晨光曙，叶满地，路未印，归来否？ 择一路，更添如画美景绝！

 

少年壮志也轻狂，老夫忆顾来时路。 夕阳晚，青山相对伴，终不悔。

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• 您怎么回的？Frost的满江红不讲平仄？ -笑问- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2018 postreply 20:04:38

• 就是，都怪frost。他应该注明， -码头工- ♀ (348 bytes) () 04/17/2018 postreply 20:12:06