问好，欣赏学习! 其余我还未琢磨，起头几句似乎也感觉：

The spring flowers on trees(The spring forest flowers) have withered(faded) (all)away,

Too hastily,

Beyond the chill(cold) morning rain(shower）and evening wind.

如果考虑到褪色，可用fade？另外这三句只是感觉，对长短句式，音节。。未琢。