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来源: 逢缘随意 于 2014-11-07 06:50:53 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (327 bytes)
1. with my heart setting aside;
2. here "roars" should be "roar";
3. "blows" should be "blowing";
4. rather say "Once upon a time the moonlight was bright;
5. something being denied;
6. being so untied.
个见, 不见得一定正确。不要介意喔。

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