看到Ling1984的译诗，很高兴。一首唐诗，一段美诗，征中译英，英译中

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马作人语 （国人伟大，一千多年无人怀疑唐朝马用汉语作诗）

芦荻花，
此花开后
路无家。 （《全唐诗》卷867）


Directive   (by Robert Lee Frost, 1874-1963)  （此首较难译，只选第一段贴出----仔细看看，其实只是一句。你想分几句译？分析一下说话人的口气：老农？游客？历史学家？社会批评家？分析语言：俚语？口语？教育良好的口语？书面语？正式语？古雅语？）

Back out of this now too much for us,
Back in a time made simple by the loss
Of detail, burned, dissolved, and broken off
Like graveyard marble sculture in the weather,
There is a house that is no more a house
Upon a farm that is no more a farm
And in a town that is no more a town.


Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening   (by Robert  Frost)  (这首稍易，试译第一、四两段；如有兴趣，可全译）

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

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