谢谢。英诗的音步,抑扬,和韵一向是翻译的难点。

本帖于 2013-01-09 03:25:54 时间, 由普通用户 nuts000 编辑
回答: 调整了原诗的一些次序,译得很巧!阿留2013-01-06 15:03:35

再加上文化差异,很不好翻译。就像你说,诗是要读的。

全诗读起来, 很有韵律感。

The Fountains mingle with the Rivers (A)
And the Rivers with the Oceans, (B)
The winds of Heaven mix forever (A)
With a sweet emotion; (B)
Nothing in the world is single; (C)
All things by a law divine (D)
In one spirit meet and mingle. (C)
Why not I with thine? -- (D)

See the mountains kiss high Heaven
And the waves clasp one another;
No sister-flower would be forgiven
If it disdained its brother,
And the sunlight clasps the earth
And the moonbeams kiss the sea:
What is all this sweet work worth
If thou kiss not me?

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