新诗古译：Robert Frost《冰与火》之《浪淘沙》

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Fire and Ice
By Robert Frost  

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favour fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

 

浪淘沙 火与冰

末日火湖燃，
又道冰寒。
曾经欲望烤当年。
宇宙熊熊神火怒，
烈焰雕栏。

世界再生还，
大限蹒跚。
深知嫉恨冻河山。
天地凄凄风雪冷，
死海冰川。

火湖：《圣经》启示录里有火湖审判。

 

Robert Frost
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Robert Lee Frost (March 26, 1874 – January 29, 1963) was an American poet. He is highly regarded for his realistic depictions of rural life and his command of American colloquial speech. His work frequently employed settings from rural life in New England in the early twentieth century, using them to examine complex social and philosophical themes. One of the most popular and critically respected American poets of his generation, Frost was honored frequently during his lifetime, receiving four Pulitzer Prizes for Poetry.

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• 回复：新诗古译：Robert Frost《冰与火》之《浪淘沙》 -盲人一个- ♀ (51 bytes) () 02/28/2012 postreply 20:21:08

• 有道理。谢盲师指教。。。 -湘西山民- ♂ (353 bytes) () 02/29/2012 postreply 04:22:04

• 遵命凑新译一首（草稿） -湘西山民- ♂ (558 bytes) () 02/29/2012 postreply 06:58:41

• 满有意境的，只是语言要些锤炼。 -*东篱*- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/29/2012 postreply 06:08:38

• 谢谢。试着改动了几个字。。。 -湘西山民- ♂ (870 bytes) () 02/29/2012 postreply 07:59:09

• 译得不错 -阁主- ♀ (23 bytes) () 02/29/2012 postreply 10:55:20

• 谢指教。马上就改。 -湘西山民- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/29/2012 postreply 11:12:38

• 我在一边静静地学~~一向佩服译诗的朋友，自己曾想尝试但觉得很难：） -安静- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/29/2012 postreply 15:09:24

• 谢谢鼓励。 -湘西山民- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/29/2012 postreply 16:12:33