Some minor tweaks

个见, 仅供参考~

joint is mostly used as adj;used as verb in more structure connection

 

A wife joins a hu*****and.

They walk hand in hand.

Love enpowers the growing family,

which becomes stronger and grander.

所有跟帖： 

• 悄悄问一下：写诗要不要讲语法？ -closeby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2011 postreply 20:07:26

• 好像不一定 -nuts000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2011 postreply 20:10:54

• 谢谢意见： joins 可用于法律条款，说明共享。。字典上有。 -ee888- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/22/2011 postreply 02:25:33

• 其它修正很好。。 -ee888- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/22/2011 postreply 02:32:13