小试英诗五字四行： FAMILY LOVE

A wife joints a hu*****and.

They walk hand by hand.

Love powers growing the family,

which becomes strong and grand.

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• 好玩 -松风阁主- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2011 postreply 17:50:07

• 让Nuts兄评一下，N兄也写英诗的 -closeby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2011 postreply 18:31:18

• Some minor tweaks -nuts000- ♀ (671 bytes) () 09/21/2011 postreply 19:45:17

• 悄悄问一下：写诗要不要讲语法？ -closeby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2011 postreply 20:07:26

• 好像不一定 -nuts000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2011 postreply 20:10:54

• 谢谢意见： joins 可用于法律条款，说明共享。。字典上有。 -ee888- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/22/2011 postreply 02:25:33

• 其它修正很好。。 -ee888- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/22/2011 postreply 02:32:13