Miss Right

-- 谢谢茉儿介绍石进原《夜的钢琴曲》之五

You are my Miss Right

Not the left nor the right

Right there in the light

of the classroom we met

 

I knew I had to try

second time just might

get your bite out right

 

It was your voice alright

soaking me in the delight

as if we meant for that night

 

You said you were quite uptight

all I could feel was feather light

since my heart flew out like a kite

 

You were quite noticeable on the first sight

You said you did not notice my height

None of those mattered after the delight

flushed our hearts at the speed of light

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• I'm so enjoyed in the light of the both. -新篁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2010 postreply 11:58:04

• nice poem, I rally enjoy reading it. -紫雨风弦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2010 postreply 17:33:28

• Sorry，my typing mistake. Really, not rally. -紫雨风弦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2010 postreply 17:34:39

• A so readable English poem, clear and beautiful. -训- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2010 postreply 18:54:46

• Very bright and sweet. -xl太阳- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2010 postreply 19:05:12

• my left is your right. -LinMu- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/21/2010 postreply 00:08:24

• 你是我的蜜思正爱， 既不左也不右歪，在彼此相遇的教室光忆中摇摆。 -ling1984- ♀ (322 bytes) () 08/21/2010 postreply 09:39:32

• 蜜思正爱，方兴未艾，英译文都帅！ -英华- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/21/2010 postreply 10:18:30

• 灵儿和那那，绝配。嘿嘿。。俺跑。~~ -苏茉儿- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/21/2010 postreply 12:21:20

• 茉儿别跑，那那说了，额到队伍最后排乖乖站好，他追你到天涯海角。。。 -ling1984- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/21/2010 postreply 14:31:40

• 玩笑哈，灵儿不会介意吧。~~ -苏茉儿- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/21/2010 postreply 16:18:06

• 姐姐不介意，就怕那那嘟囔呢！ 茉儿多写几首诗，那那就开心了。 -ling1984- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/21/2010 postreply 18:38:34

• 谢谢灵仙再译，这也能找韵确非易事：） -nuts000- ♀ (72 bytes) () 08/22/2010 postreply 12:59:35

• 谢诸位喜欢~~ -nuts000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/22/2010 postreply 13:00:52