sorry I revised your writing

(misused words in parenthesis and certain words added)

“I know an American (joined) who went to law school in his 40s(,) and got a good job after that. But he (was) already had been a professor before he started law school, and according to him, law school (is ) was just a piece of cake to him.”

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• 回复：sorry I revised your writing -greencardwaiting- ♀ (537 bytes) () 01/17/2009 postreply 13:59:01

• 回复：sorry I revised your writing -greencardwaiting- ♀ (305 bytes) () 01/17/2009 postreply 14:05:42

• you should ALWAYS pay attention to your writing.... -yiyiying- ♀ (70 bytes) () 01/21/2009 postreply 13:08:27

• That's not an excuse of writting badly. -ideserveit- ♀ (238 bytes) () 07/13/2009 postreply 13:27:13

• CO：sorry I revised your writing -ideserveit- ♀ (218 bytes) () 06/29/2009 postreply 17:07:51