昨日花开春还在,
今日风吹显新态,
枫红柳绿交相映,
赏心悦目欢快来。
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嗯,写得好!
-华灜-
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11/13/2010 postreply
02:21:19
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第三句是为了喘气放松用的,可以不押韵。哈哈哈,这个多请教静斋居士,他更厉害!
-youyi98-
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11/13/2010 postreply
03:20:08
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