你上去问,有不少人是愿意帮你起草这话是怎么说的。我昨天就看到一段,不保证管用。
Thank you so much for extending an offer of admission to our child. Your school was always our favorite and top choice. Unfortunately, our final decision is going to have to depend on financial aid. We applied to other schools, and, quite frankly, their need-based aid was more generous, with expected family contributions of $X-Y. Is there any flexibility on your part with regard to the package? Your school has long been our top choice and we hate that our decision may come down to just dollars and cents. Please do let us know.”