再分享一段小娃的小说,感觉写的真poetic。语言真的很神奇

“Can we stick together?” Hisako asked so very convincingly, so convincingly that I wanted to actually stick with her and trust her, to tell that we would both be fine; but that wasn’t the truth. I would’ve been lying if I said that. It wasn’t okay, nothing was and might never be again, it’s like a riddle I’ve heard before. It destroys mountains, kills kings, slaughters dragons, and disintegrates diamonds; time. Time changes so much, it could just be a matter of seconds and your life could completely turn upside down, and yet this same thing that had betrayed me so many times would now be the thing I needed more of. I needed time to think of what to do, to think about my next step in this maze of one thousand pathways, yet, it was as if a lion was chasing me, stealing away this precious resource. One path ends in death, the others lead in tragedy, however, through the shrouds of murder and betrayal, there was a path that was better than the rest: an escape.

 

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小天才。 -篱笆08- 给 篱笆08 发送悄悄话 篱笆08 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:13:43

年少时咱不用“天才”这个词:) -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:16:34

人才! -小松松- 给 小松松 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:22:40

是不是智商特高的小娃?赞! -追求平凡- 给 追求平凡 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:16:30

哈哈哈哈 -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:16:55

你家看来也是文科生 lol -jingzhumama- 给 jingzhumama 发送悄悄话 jingzhumama 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:16:41

是啊,我也这么怀疑:) -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:17:15

文科生挺好的 -jingzhumama- 给 jingzhumama 发送悄悄话 jingzhumama 的博客首页 (210 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:21:21

啥英雄榜? 你说熊榜? -jingzhumama- 给 jingzhumama 发送悄悄话 jingzhumama 的博客首页 (86 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:22:51

我有在啊 lol -jingzhumama- 给 jingzhumama 发送悄悄话 jingzhumama 的博客首页 (70 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:28:30

真是天生的,赞! -janeice60- 给 janeice60 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:20:39

你女儿的文字感觉真好。楼下说孩子的智商来自母亲,你可以好好骄傲一下! -小松松- 给 小松松 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:21:42

+1 -嘉荷- 给 嘉荷 发送悄悄话 嘉荷 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:23:37

+2 -夏云- 给 夏云 发送悄悄话 夏云 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:31:19

+3 -Croissant_22- 给 Croissant_22 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:39:11

+4 -紫牡丹- 给 紫牡丹 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:47:02

大叔说实在,不喜欢坐在阁楼里幻想出来的东西。 写不出“悲惨世界”, 也写个“LGBT世界”之类的? -updateonline- 给 updateonline 发送悄悄话 (268 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 20:27:59

悲惨世界太好了!那一个一个人物的丰富饱满情节的跌宕起伏,百看不厌 -fakegreen- 给 fakegreen 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/14/2023 postreply 05:42:47

我觉得她是在模仿哪个名家的写作风格,个人猜测勃朗特。你家娃比同龄娃老 -zaocha2002- 给 zaocha2002 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/13/2023 postreply 23:58:02

和我娃一样,都爱写,多鼓励继续努力 -PearlJo- 给 PearlJo 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/02/2023 postreply 01:18:44

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