“Can we stick together?” Hisako asked so very convincingly, so convincingly that I wanted to actually stick with her and trust her, to tell that we would both be fine; but that wasn’t the truth. I would’ve been lying if I said that. It wasn’t okay, nothing was and might never be again, it’s like a riddle I’ve heard before. It destroys mountains, kills kings, slaughters dragons, and disintegrates diamonds; time. Time changes so much, it could just be a matter of seconds and your life could completely turn upside down, and yet this same thing that had betrayed me so many times would now be the thing I needed more of. I needed time to think of what to do, to think about my next step in this maze of one thousand pathways, yet, it was as if a lion was chasing me, stealing away this precious resource. One path ends in death, the others lead in tragedy, however, through the shrouds of murder and betrayal, there was a path that was better than the rest: an escape.
再分享一段小娃的小说,感觉写的真poetic。语言真的很神奇
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小天才。
-篱笆08-
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:13:43
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年少时咱不用“天才”这个词:)
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:16:34
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人才!
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:22:40
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是不是智商特高的小娃?赞!
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:16:30
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哈哈哈哈
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:16:55
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你家看来也是文科生 lol
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:16:41
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是啊,我也这么怀疑:)
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20:17:15
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文科生挺好的
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20:21:21
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啥英雄榜? 你说熊榜?
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:22:51
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我有在啊 lol
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:28:30
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真是天生的,赞!
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:20:39
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你女儿的文字感觉真好。楼下说孩子的智商来自母亲,你可以好好骄傲一下!
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:21:42
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+1
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:47:02
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大叔说实在,不喜欢坐在阁楼里幻想出来的东西。 写不出“悲惨世界”, 也写个“LGBT世界”之类的?
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05/13/2023 postreply
20:27:59
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悲惨世界太好了!那一个一个人物的丰富饱满情节的跌宕起伏,百看不厌
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05/14/2023 postreply
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我觉得她是在模仿哪个名家的写作风格,个人猜测勃朗特。你家娃比同龄娃老
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05/13/2023 postreply
23:58:02
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和我娃一样,都爱写,多鼓励继续努力
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