小娃小说写了15000字了,最近时间比较少

“All of you new recruits, go!” He roared, clearly shocking off the shoes of the people sitting nearest to the tattooed man. Haru immediately took that golden opportunity and sprinted off towards the direction of the hall, probably thinking in his mind how thankful he was to get away from us weirdos. All I could do was stand in confusion as a bunch of kids ran past us, following the direction Haru was heading towards; the hallways adjacent to the halls that Sophie and I came out of. 

“So, should we go…?” I asked Sophie, with her face perfectly reflecting how I felt: utter confusion. 

Sophie drew in a long breath through her mouth before grabbing my arm and sprinting after the people slowly turning the corner. The hallway slowly expanded into a large room with the ceiling being coated in a layer of tinted glass. The sunlight in there was intense, yet, a chill crept down my spine as a small old man slowly hobbled and sat down on a kitchen chair in the center of the room. The man took his time, carefully making sure his long black and red coat didn’t get caught in the seat and brushing off the dust slowly floating around the room. “So,” he creaked, pausing so aggravatingly long that I wanted to go up and scream at him, “dears. You, you must be so very curious of why, why you are all hear today.” He stopped again, gasping for breath and coughing, “We are the, The Slayers of Draconic Predators, yet we cannot simply accept everyone. So, this is the Slayer Test. Here, we test the limits, of, of your capabilities. If you can survive 3 days in here, without any outside interference, you will be accepted as one of the Slayers.” The old man stopped, gasping for breath as two men gently patted his back to circulate his breathing. 

Even though the man’s voice was old and weak, the words weighed 1,000 pounds, pounding in my head like a set of drums. Test… test, limits… limits, accepted… Those words echoed around, bouncing into one another in the most peculiar ways. 

 

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不明觉厉啊,好好鼓励,有大出息 -老糊涂2- 给 老糊涂2 发送悄悄话 老糊涂2 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 10:55:35

先赞再读 -追求平凡- 给 追求平凡 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 10:55:45

写得太好了!快出书吧 -DogandGod- 给 DogandGod 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:13:14

感谢,这才写了26页,非要写长篇,希望能最后坚持写完。平凡建议写短篇,我给小娃建议过,她说写短篇的满足感不够,所以她还是 -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (21 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:14:59

牛蛙 -yzhl888- 给 yzhl888 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:14:56

希望能持续有后劲,毕竟还有方仲永在前,哈哈 -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:16:50

牛蛙 -zaocha2002- 给 zaocha2002 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:21:32

这写作的确挺神奇的,小娃写的时候总是听YouTube视频作为背景声音,她说有助于她思路的开阔 -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (121 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:23:45

LOL,她是不是还自言自语? -zaocha2002- 给 zaocha2002 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:29:56

这个还没发现,哈哈哈。不过她的确说过睡觉的时候她会构思她的小说 -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:33:35

写作时候自言自语 -zaocha2002- 给 zaocha2002 发送悄悄话 (260 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:35:15

哈哈哈,他自己意识到了吗? -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:38:57

是啊 -zaocha2002- 给 zaocha2002 发送悄悄话 (117 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:40:37

牛娃! -julie116- 给 julie116 发送悄悄话 julie116 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:28:10

太厉害了 -qqdragon- 给 qqdragon 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:41:13

比我是强太多了:) -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:50:47

投稿,写作比赛,夏校.... -兔快跑吧- 给 兔快跑吧 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:49:13

感谢指路:) -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 11:51:04

这个厉害! -phoenix05- 给 phoenix05 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 12:00:59

精彩 -兄贵- 给 兄贵 发送悄悄话 兄贵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 12:09:46

哇,你女儿太牛了,写的很好啊。赶紧开始参加写作比赛吧。 -Pilsung- 给 Pilsung 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 12:23:08

写作比赛都要13岁以上的。考虑到时候试一下 -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 13:01:01

你女儿是天才啊。她从小读了不少古典名著吧。文笔很成熟。 -小松松- 给 小松松 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 12:36:41

古典的没怎么读呢。打算这个暑假读点莎士比亚的。她的读书量感觉在美国孩子中不算读的多的。她喜欢反复读一本书,读小说也属于 -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (64 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 13:05:03

厉害! -DukeAB- 给 DukeAB 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 13:08:33

写的不错,赞一个!多大了? -其乐无穷- 给 其乐无穷 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 13:16:06

11岁 -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 16:22:29

她的确追求做个有趣的人:) -两女宝妈- 给 两女宝妈 发送悄悄话 两女宝妈 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 16:23:12

好历害! -Xitong999- 给 Xitong999 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/28/2023 postreply 14:11:00

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