求助,分期付款的翻译。

10%定金合同后1周,20%发货前一周内,40%收到货物后1周,其余的30%安装调试验收后30天。

我的翻译:10% deposit dues in 1 week after the contract, 20% of total payment dues the week before delivery, 40% of the total payment dues 1 week after the (goods/machine/equipment) are received, and the remaining 30% will due in 30 days after the installation.

有什么不妥,请指正。谢谢!

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