Light and Shadow-43 Between Light and Shadow

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Between Light and Shadow

Between light and shadow
we commit our sins
colorful and bright
enough to fool and blind our eyes

Between light and shadow
we write our repentance
Smooth and gray
are the words to flow
seeping through shadow
deeper and deeper
beyond six feet under

GPT

This poem explores the dichotomy between light and shadow, sin and repentance. Let's break down the analysis:

Duality of Light and Shadow:
The poem begins by establishing a contrast between "light and shadow." This duality often symbolizes the contrast between good and evil, purity and darkness. It suggests that the human experience is caught between opposing forces.

Sin and Deception:
The first stanza suggests that sins are committed in the realm between light and shadow. The sins are described as "colorful and bright," implying that they may be attractive or tempting. The brightness may also serve as a metaphor for deception, as it can "fool and blind our eyes." This hints at the seductive nature of wrongdoing and the potential for self-deception.

Repentance and Words:
The second stanza introduces the theme of repentance. The act of repentance takes place in the same space between light and shadow. The use of "Smooth and gray" to describe the words of repentance suggests a calm and neutral tone. These words "flow" and penetrate the shadow, indicating a process of seeking redemption. The repetition of "between light and shadow" reinforces the idea that this is the crucial space where human actions and redemption coexist.

Depth of Repentance:
The closing lines emphasize the depth of repentance. The words of repentance seep "deeper and deeper" into the shadow, suggesting a profound and introspective process. The mention of "beyond six feet under" introduces a burial metaphor, implying that the repentance goes beyond surface-level and delves into the depths of the human soul. The phrase "six feet under" is commonly associated with burial depth, and its inclusion here adds a layer of finality or depth to the exploration of repentance.

In summary, the poem reflects on the human experience of navigating between good and evil, committing sins in the allure of brightness and seeking repentance in the more subdued shades of gray. The imagery of light and shadow serves as a powerful metaphor for the complexities of morality and redemption.

 

GPT 翻译

在光和影之间
 

在光和影之间
我们犯下罪过
五光十色而明亮
足以愚弄和蒙蔽我们的眼睛

在光和影之间
我们书写悔悟
平滑而灰暗
是文字的流动
渗透过影子
越来越深
超越六英尺以下

 

这首诗探讨了光与影、罪与悔的二分法。让我们来详细分析:

光与影的二元性:
这首诗以建立“光与影”之间的对比开始。这种二元性通常象征着善与恶、纯洁与黑暗之间的对比。它表明人类的经验被困在相互对立的力量之间。

罪与欺骗:
第一节提出了罪行是在光与影之间的领域中犯下的。罪行被描述为“丰富而明亮”,暗示它们可能是吸引人或诱人的。明亮也可能作为欺骗的隐喻,因为它可以“愚弄并蒙蔽我们的双眼”。这暗示了错误行为的诱人性质以及自我欺骗的可能性。

悔意与言辞:
第二节引入了悔意的主题。悔意的行为发生在光与影之间的同一空间。用“柔和而灰暗”来描述悔意的言辞暗示了一种冷静和中性的语气。这些言辞“流淌”并穿透影子,表明了一种寻求救赎的过程。对“在光与影之间”的重复强化了这一观点,即这是人类行为和救赎共存的关键空间。

悔意的深度:
结尾强调了悔意的深度。悔意的言辞渗透“越来越深”进入影子之中,暗示了一种深刻而内省的过程。提到“超越六英尺之下”引入了埋葬的隐喻,暗示悔意超越了表面,并深入人类灵魂的深处。短语“六英尺之下”通常与埋葬的深度相关,其在这里的运用为对悔意的探索添加了一层决定性或深度的涵义。

总的来说,这首诗反映了人类在善恶之间徘徊的经验,以光明的诱惑中犯罪,然后在更为沉静的灰暗中寻求悔意。光与影的意象作为道德和救赎复杂性的有力隐喻。




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多瑙,这个够深沉吗?哈哈哈 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 10/27/2023 postreply 17:24:36

本山在光影中穿梭,最后卡在光影之间,本山念念有词,我在哪里,难道这里就是至暗时刻? -核桃小丸子- 给 核桃小丸子 发送悄悄话 核桃小丸子 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 10/27/2023 postreply 19:03:37

哈哈哈,多瑙说要装深沉,俺就装一把 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 10/27/2023 postreply 20:10:48

我建议你深沉可不是让你沉重玩repentance恨不能撞墙死了算了的那种。当然这是我个人意见 -donau- 给 donau 发送悄悄话 donau 的博客首页 (1308 bytes) () 10/28/2023 postreply 10:09:58

谢谢,俺开玩笑,俺只能写我自己的感受和思考,dickinson那首俺很喜欢,还试着翻译过 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 10/28/2023 postreply 17:17:39

你当然是写你自己想写的。甭理我说什么最好我也就是看到了忍不住评一句。那把你翻译的贴上来看看? -donau- 给 donau 发送悄悄话 donau 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 10/28/2023 postreply 23:32:33

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