Many a me 在英文诗歌网站上首页 显摆一把

好玩的是这个网站是个电脑高手弄的，他弄了个给诗歌打分的，按照分数置顶，不过他也“优化”他的打分系统。最新版给的分数和老板几乎180度转弯。这个是近一年前写的，那时分数很低的，新版来了，竟然置顶了。哈哈哈。

 

Many a Me

Many a Me
drowned in your eyes
roll down your face
and fall onto my palms
cold and warm
Seep through my fingers
drop by drop
vanish into the soil
© Oct '22

Likes: kevin, MissHexxx, kaye, Autumnhope2, Shidare, Ken Doll, Apollo Silvercrest, Frélancér, Denis Blazevic, Soulstice1, Jackybee, Beyonder, Cam., Busy, AbelBPoetry, Roha

 

Shidare - It sounds like the beautiful song of a teardrop.... Singing of the melancholic life of its own kind. The rythym... very soothing and easy. Beautiful precious one
6 hours ago

Busy - Fantastic poem. I can relate to it well. Keep going
8 hours ago

Busy - Interpretation first put forward by the profound german philosopher professor martin Heidegger. Or was it Nietzsche before him. I dunno! Lol
7 hours ago

Busy - But lol this is but my interpretation of the poem. Sorry if it is miles out.
7 hours ago

Busy - We all get sanded down and vanished like pieces of wood lol in Zen I think they call it the lacquer barrel but I am not sure. But I had a friend a few years ago telling me about it. You never know it may be a universal! But as a particular it related to me anyway. Great poem.
7 hours ago

 

 

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• 谢谢分享。觉得自己的英文不行，但知道有线上翻译可以用，于是就试了3个，译文在内。 -Shubin- ♂ (4660 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:53:09

• 谢谢，1+3都不离谱啊 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:19:30

• 把me 换成 potato是不是也通：） -核桃小丸子- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:55:24

• 核桃兄你这脑洞开得够大。英文咱不行，但这仨软件是接受potato和walnut ball的，只不过各有各的味道。 -Shubin- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 09:03:59

• 我就是淘气，想着把一个土豆把玩也挺有趣 -核桃小丸子- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 09:19:12

• 就知道你在设套使坏儿… :)) -土豆-禾苗- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 09:44:56

• 好，迷你透明 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:19:07

• 本山这个是好，语言的魅力一下就显出来了，就是用最简单的词造出最神奇的景和情，说Fantastic一点都不错啊 -donau- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 23:19:54

• 谢谢多瑙 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2023 postreply 08:19:53