内容先不谈，but very poor English。

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• Not exemplary, but defnitely not "very poor" -weston- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/23/2015 postreply 09:36:12

• 那一处, 她时态混用, 在对比同学一直在用iphone, 而她起先不是.其实她只要说 -weston- ♀ (147 bytes) () 05/23/2015 postreply 10:47:56

• 小中应该好好学英文。正确的英文是这样的，比如， -壮士- ♂ (163 bytes) () 05/23/2015 postreply 11:06:51

• 你的改动会让上下连贯变的单调 -HopeWait- ♂ (272 bytes) () 05/24/2015 postreply 19:16:36

• hehe, i thought she was from china for a minute. -blackmatter- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/23/2015 postreply 09:36:16