老二去年写的诗，因为书读多了，我感觉就是抄袭原作，不过完全是靠脑子里的记忆

Language Arts
14 December 2020
Memory
By -xxxx
Twas the night before Christmas and all through the house , not a creature was peeping , not even a mouse. A memory Then struck me , something from my dreams , something cold , something green. Something from a movie , something from a play. Something with a heart , something with a brain. Something that moved me , something that changed. This something…..,I thought , was it something from a memory? Was it a memory that lost sense to everybody? Was it something important? Something I later forgot? Was this something someone? Someone with a dog? The dog’s name was Max , I think , I believe. The someone was cruel , though not what they seemed? The something is someone who has love for his mother. This someone has feelings , though they seem to be covered. Covered by darkness , covered by dread , covered by the feeling that gets in your head. This someone , I thought , must be an awful lot brave. Though maybe , he is always afraid? This person is just a thought though , a thought in a pinch. A thought that is also known as the very evil Grinch.
The End

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• 厉害呀，节奏感画面感真好！几岁？可以试着投稿？ -可能成功的P- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/25/2021 postreply 17:14:59

• 谢谢，11 岁写的，不投稿，就是学校写的作业，去年圣诞节学校的作业 -tax2- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/25/2021 postreply 17:25:36