FYI, Borisng 同志

我想了想你应该这样的写，当然我不知道具体情况，我写的只供你参考。
你应该跟你的女儿和你的太太商讨，看看如何写合适，特别是你的女儿，这是一个很好的锻炼的机会。
我本人自己的重要文件，都是经过和太太孩子们商量之后，才发出去的。
希望对你有帮助，
祝愿你的女儿成功。
无忧

To Whom It May Concern,
My daughter, name is applying for the program in college name 2018.
As usual, parents know their kids better than anyone else. I am blessed that I have such as wonderful daughter who is honest, proactive and working hard. Wherever she goes and whatever she does, she earns respects from whom that she works with.
Over years, your daughter name has developed her interest in financial and accounting.  She is determined to follow her mom, name who graduated with a degree of financial and accounting from the name of the college in 19XX.
Your daughter name is excellent in both Chinese speaking and writing. She attended Chinese school in China from 19XX to 19XX.  This shall be a plus for the international study program in college name. Your daughter name would love to help those international students in college name.
Both my wife and I are alumni of college name (Ph. D XXXX and MBA XXXX). We truly appreciate the excellence of college name.  I am so happy that my daughter is applying for this program. She will surely take the advantages of this great program and make great progress.
With great gratitude and appreciation,
Your Full Name
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• 老吴，写得好坏另外说，凭这份热心，这次真心给你点个赞哈 -ziqimalvern- ♂ (169 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 13:18:49