女儿去年游完大峡谷写的Blog

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The Endless Stretch of Hope

    The glaring sun burned my neck and I felt sweat trickling down my back. Five minutes out of the car, and I was already dying of heat! I forced my weary legs to trudge on the winding path. I felt like falling down, but commanded myself to go on ‘If you’re here now, you might as well look at it,’ I thought.  But stumbling some more, I started to feel annoyed. Was it really that amazing? 

     “Come on!” my parents’ voices disrupted my thoughts, and it took me a moment to realize I was there. Finally, I was at The Grand Canyon. I jogged the remaining path to the railing. Not expecting much, I shielded my eyes and looked down.          

     The sight left my breath in my throat. The canyon seemed to stretch forever, a jagged formation that towered both high and low above the ground with gleaming granite rock. The Colorado River, a bright shade of blue against the red, brown, and white of the rock dotted the scene with a delicate tint, and patches of green shrubs added to the array of colors.

     Abruptly, my annoyance was gone, replaced by sudden optimism. Instead of burning, the sun was just a warm life source as it shone against the blue sky down to the daring peaks and gentle curves of rock. The whole scene, the whole world, suddenly seemed beautiful. Beautiful in every way!

     Thinking at it now, I realize that the Grand Canyon changed me in a simple, yet important way. How did the tiny Colorado River run through those tons of rocks, and shape it so beautifully? How is the Grand Canyon even possible? I believe it just requires strength, courage, and determination. With those tools, along with believing, anything can happen.

     The Grand Canyon is hope. It shows anything can come true, if you give it time. It’s not only one of nature’s greatest wonders, but taught me how to truly appreciate the world, to show us to never give up, and to remind us of our limitless imagination. So if a river can shape this world, why can’t I?

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小声问一句,真没其他意思:你读其他孩子的文章吗? -香香生煎馒头- 给 香香生煎馒头 发送悄悄话 香香生煎馒头 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 12:07:59

回复:小声问一句,真没其他意思:你读其他孩子的文章吗? -Frankie1211- 给 Frankie1211 发送悄悄话 (31 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 12:09:41

写得很好。还会点睛。 -洲河- 给 洲河 发送悄悄话 洲河 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 12:16:15

女儿多大? -dalla- 给 dalla 发送悄悄话 dalla 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 12:12:57

回复:女儿多大? -Frankie1211- 给 Frankie1211 发送悄悄话 (9 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 12:14:19

父母无须多虑,儿女的天赋不会被埋没 -yisu- 给 yisu 发送悄悄话 yisu 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 12:19:18

羡慕愿意写的孩子:)) -胡桃架子-- 给 胡桃架子- 发送悄悄话 胡桃架子- 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 12:46:17

写得很好, 我家小子写作太BORING, 这大概是天生的, 没办法 :( -QiTian- 给 QiTian 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 12:47:30

是大脑的结构性不同, 和身体的状况不同. 孩子和孩子性格爱好也不会一样. -worriedmom1- 给 worriedmom1 发送悄悄话 worriedmom1 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 13:03:09

回复:女儿去年游完大峡谷写的Blog -fanwuliao- 给 fanwuliao 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 15:04:58

very well written! I am impressed! -fanwuliao- 给 fanwuliao 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2012 postreply 15:05:49

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