后两句与前两句既乏语境上的关联氛围,更失修辞上的连续技法,兀突生硬

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• Well,look the answer upstairs -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:24:30

• 乌衣巷,白鹭洲,莫愁lake==>南京 understand? -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:28:34

• I know it refers to 南京,could Nan Jin goes back to where with a -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:39:31

• goes back to 南京 within the rain -暗金菜刀- ♂ (57 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:44:40

• I have never went to High School, Baby! -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:48:37

• That's why -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:52:37

• and I don't think you complete middle school. -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 14:10:48

• ok,stop -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 14:13:54

• 暗金不该让你重温中学语文，可你一着急，又该重温中学英语了。^_^。 -今夜你不会来- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 16:38:27

• 姐姐真伸:可你一着急，又该重温中学英语了。^_^。 -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 21:17:21

• 我这么想：前两句是归人心里所想：“风流总被雨打风吹去” -青皮芋头- ♀ (163 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 15:34:09

• 想得没说,说得没想啊.......... -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 21:11:23