前两句美妙流畅,后两句文字堆砌,主谓混乱,语意生涩,不知所云.
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ok,莫愁东南有名邑.莫愁 means what?
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:13:34
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莫愁not means don't worry about,it's the name of a lake
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:23:03
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若莫愁means湖,how could a lake go back with a person. otherwise,
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:37:11
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Hahahaha,I have to go back to work,see you later
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:41:33
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一个人走,有朦胧烟雨相伴,多美呀!
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04/26/2007 postreply
15:05:47
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既然有一个“归”字,就不能说是有第三个人在问路吧! 即便是给人指路
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04/26/2007 postreply
15:17:52
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后两句与前两句既乏语境上的关联氛围,更失修辞上的连续技法,兀突生硬
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:23:02
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Well,look the answer upstairs
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:24:30
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乌衣巷,白鹭洲,莫愁lake==>南京 understand?
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:28:34
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I know it refers to 南京,could Nan Jin goes back to where with a
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:39:31
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goes back to 南京 within the rain
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:44:40
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I have never went to High School, Baby!
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:48:37
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That's why
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04/26/2007 postreply
13:52:37
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and I don't think you complete middle school.
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04/26/2007 postreply
14:10:48
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ok,stop
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04/26/2007 postreply
14:13:54
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暗金不该让你重温中学语文,可你一着急,又该重温中学英语了。^_^。
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04/26/2007 postreply
16:38:27
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姐姐真伸:可你一着急,又该重温中学英语了。^_^。
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04/26/2007 postreply
21:17:21
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我这么想:前两句是归人心里所想:“风流总被雨打风吹去”
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04/26/2007 postreply
15:34:09
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想得没说,说得没想啊..........
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04/26/2007 postreply
21:11:23