莫愁东南有名邑,且伴烟雨随人归 - 不知所云
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• ???? Hardly to understand what you said.... -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 12:14:47
• That's what I said.... -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:03:32
• Hoho,I have no idea -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:11:36
• 前两句美妙流畅,后两句文字堆砌,主谓混乱,语意生涩,不知所云. -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:08:12
• ok,莫愁东南有名邑.莫愁 means what? -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:13:34
• 莫愁not means don't worry about,it's the name of a lake -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:23:03
• 若莫愁means湖,how could a lake go back with a person. otherwise, -鸿浩- ♂ (95 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:37:11
• Hahahaha,I have to go back to work,see you later -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:41:33
• 一个人走,有朦胧烟雨相伴,多美呀! -青皮芋头- ♀ (120 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 15:05:47
• 既然有一个“归”字,就不能说是有第三个人在问路吧! 即便是给人指路 -青皮芋头- ♀ (77 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 15:17:52
• 后两句与前两句既乏语境上的关联氛围,更失修辞上的连续技法,兀突生硬 -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:23:02
• Well,look the answer upstairs -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:24:30
• 乌衣巷,白鹭洲,莫愁lake==>南京 understand? -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:28:34
• I know it refers to 南京,could Nan Jin goes back to where with a -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:39:31
• goes back to 南京 within the rain -暗金菜刀- ♂ (57 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:44:40
• I have never went to High School, Baby! -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:48:37
• That's why -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:52:37
• and I don't think you complete middle school. -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 14:10:48
• ok,stop -暗金菜刀- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 14:13:54
• 暗金不该让你重温中学语文,可你一着急,又该重温中学英语了。^_^。 -今夜你不会来- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 16:38:27
• 姐姐真伸:可你一着急,又该重温中学英语了。^_^。 -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 21:17:21
• 我这么想:前两句是归人心里所想:“风流总被雨打风吹去” -青皮芋头- ♀ (163 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 15:34:09
• 想得没说,说得没想啊.......... -鸿浩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 21:11:23
• 且待(伴)烟雨随人归 - 好懂点吗? -15少- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 13:56:28
• 我觉得鸿浩是说随人不好懂,谁随人而归呀?所以他说主谓不清。 -今夜你不会来- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 16:49:18
• 喜欢这个“烟雨随人归”的意境,试图救活它,所以擅改一字 -15少- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/27/2007 postreply 00:55:51
• 孬意思我瞎改改,拿不出手也拿了:莫愁幽怨犹在耳,烟雨时节最思归。 -今夜你不会来- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 16:55:57
• 忘了你们这是在编谜语了。暗金为了做谜能写出这个己经不容易了。 -今夜你不会来- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2007 postreply 17:08:19