最浪漫的事，请高手帮忙翻译

上学时的好友，一位金发女孩，与未婚夫相恋四年，同居两年，就要举行隆重的婚典。她知道我喜欢诗，让我推荐一首在婚礼上朗诵。我立即想到了浪漫的事，随便翻译给她，她感动万分，爱不释手，选定为婚礼节目。

“The most romantic thing I can think of,
is to grow old with you little by little,
with a memory of munitia of mirth,
chatting with you slowly in a rocking chair.

The most romantic thing I can think of,
is to get old with you by little and little,
until we are unable to go anywhere,
you still cherish me as a treasure in your hand."

不知哪位高手能帮忙改进译词呢？多谢了。

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