再譯

Chill rain
Of autumn
Piercing into lung

Fragrance
Of potted Orchid
Melting
Into blurry lights
And shadows
On the stone stairs

Chill rain
Of autumn
Piercing into lung

Passion for painting
Seeking recreation
From brush and ink

Sheet of white paper
Floating
Shining
Like a sharp blade

Silk
Taken out
Of a black-leathered bag
Lain on the ground

Inspiration
Flooding
Onto the white silk
Where
Mountains and rivers
Surrendering
To my brush

Or being lowered
Or being lifted

Under the full control
Of the Creator

Who lets down
Bridge of clouds
Over the galaxy
In the night sky
Of lunar July 7th

A painting
For celebrating
The reunion of
The long-separated
Lovers

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• 精益求精 -小弟感pei- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/08/2004 postreply 17:53:42

• 很好!:) -风支书- ♀ (116 bytes) () 07/09/2004 postreply 10:49:10

• 还记得梦冉说过红楼梦里，饮一大白乎：) -whisper- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/09/2004 postreply 14:32:02

• 译得好! -浅水妖姬- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/09/2004 postreply 10:57:37

• 謝謝捧場﹐我的臉笑成了一朵菊花﹕) -影云- ♀ (56 bytes) () 07/09/2004 postreply 11:06:47

• 很灿烂﹕) -Tidragon- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/09/2004 postreply 11:17:37

• 厉害! :) -Tidragon- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/09/2004 postreply 11:13:52