缘何梦君?
拂晓暗褪
旧忆叩扉
以肘支颐
雾窗凝目
原以皆忘
梦回痛溃
似笺翩至
昔人已去
缘何梦君?
拂晓暗褪
旧忆叩扉
以肘支颐
雾窗凝目
原以皆忘
梦回痛溃
似笺翩至
昔人已去
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改的很好,四言一般不讲平仄,最多就是争取押韵。我也是写着玩的。
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