castle brick

castle brick Brick by brick, A castle was built. I work. then I wonder. I am up. then I am down. After it's dark, I enter to hide. I don’t know how to be the branch on a tree. I don't know how to cover a fire with the skin. I don't know what is happening. Night is quiet. Heart is noisy. Black is not black. White is not white. Brick by brick. The castle swallowed me, in this warm spring.

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没看懂~~~ -米可- 给 米可 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2015 postreply 19:45:14

写得真好,如果一句一段,效果更好 -师太明年三十八- 给 师太明年三十八 发送悄悄话 师太明年三十八 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 03/14/2015 postreply 10:40:22

汗一个. -八落- 给 八落 发送悄悄话 (22 bytes) () 03/14/2015 postreply 14:32:00

写的挺好的,就是阴暗些,希望只是暂时的状态而已。 -一片老姜- 给 一片老姜 发送悄悄话 一片老姜 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 03/16/2015 postreply 08:44:33

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