'may i feel said he'

本帖于 2014-02-08 18:49:13 时间, 由普通用户 罗曼 编辑

“亲热下,他说”
 
德龙译

亲热下,他说
(我会叫,她说
就一次,他说)
有意思,她说
 
(我摸摸,他说
多少下,她说
很多下,他说)
随你便,她说
 
(进去了,他说
别太深,她说
能多深,他说
就那儿,她说)
 
待会儿,他说
(待哪儿,她说
就这儿,他说
得亲我,她说
 
想动了,他说
是做爱,她说)
你愿意,他说
(你害我,她说

是天意,他说
你老婆,她说
顾眼前,他说)
那好吧,她说
 
(悠着点,他说
别停啊,她说
不行了,他说)
慢慢来,她说
 
(爽到吗? 他说
当然啦,她说)
你好骚!他说
(你归我,她说)

原文

"may i feel said he"
by e. e. cummings
may i feel said he
(i'll squeal said she
just once said he)
it's fun said she
(may I touch said he
how much said she
a lot said he)
why not said she
(let's go said he
not too far said she
what's too far said he
where you are said she)
may i stay said he
(which way said she
like this said he
if you kiss said she
may i move said he
it is love said she)
if you're willing said he
(but you're killing said she
but it's life said he
but your wife said she
now said he)
ow said she
(tiptop said he
don't stop said she
oh nn said he)
go slow said she
(cccome?said he
ummm said she
you're divine!said he
(you are Mine said she)
 
 

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