怎么就整不出那暧昧的劲儿呢

"may i feel said he" by e. e. cummings may i fell said he (i'll squeal said she just once said he) it's fun said she  (may I touch said he how much said she a lot said he) why not said she (let's go said he not too far said she what's too far said he where you are said she) may i stay said he (which way said she like this said he if you kiss said she may i move said he it is love said she) if you're willing said he (but you're killing said she but it's life said he but your wife said she now said he) ow said she (tiptop said he don't stop said she oh nn said he) go slow said she (cccome?said he ummm said she you're divine!said he (you are Mine said she)     让我碰碰他说 (那我就喊她说 就碰一下他说) 还挺好玩她说 (能不能摸摸他说 摸哪儿她说 哪儿都摸摸他说) 那随便吧她说 （让我们来吧他说 不要太那个她说 哪个呀他说 你说呢她说） 我呆会儿行吗他说 怎么个呆法她说 就这个呆法他说 那你得亲亲她说 我可以做吗他说 这算是爱吗她说 只要你乐意他说 会被你弄死她说 可这是生活他说 可是你老婆她说 哼……他说 唔……她说 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。

 

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• 很不到位地整了前XI，还差两段请窝苗舞瓜贝财匆鬼正接， -满笼桂鱼- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:22:35

• 翻得不好 -WQPY- ♂ (33 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:34:34

• 说得是啊 -满笼桂鱼- ♂ (49 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:41:03

• 当然是 -慕容西瓜- ♀ (140 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:35:10

• 瓜兄出手给改改？ -满笼桂鱼- ♂ (16 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:06:11

• 俺等苗弟先出手。。。 -慕容西瓜- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:40:28

• 我擦，我都羞涩了。。。请小同学们回避 -老裴0000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:29:55

• 纯翻译，纯翻译，纯翻译。。。 -满笼桂鱼- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:46:26

• 唉，又有好玩的来了，怎么办，怎么办！！！ -苗盼盼- ♂ (28 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:59:34

• 先说第一印象：原诗有很多internal rhyme，这个是翻译的难点 -苗盼盼- ♂ (34 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:11:45

• 还是中文比较有感觉 -大财主- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:04:42

• 我理解为还是中国人比较有感觉~~~~~：） -师太明年三十八- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:49:27

• 那是当然的了 -大财主- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:54:35

• 齐哥昧个 -七零- ♂ (2525 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 13:00:54

• 艾玛这泥马也叫诗！！！！！原作者谁啊拉出来TJJDS！！！！ -舞女- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 13:32:45

• 看完苗弟的还这么想？ -慕容西瓜- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 13:43:44

• 前XI派高手，牛。 -whiskey72- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 19:13:59

• 嘿嘿～ -小小毛毛虫- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 20:34:23