得儿如十八少艾的心令我仰慕呀!
蓦然回首里,却是灯火阑珊;有感觉!
最后几段更精彩,前面的可以稍稍简练点!“我”可以再用少点!
跟读!
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呵呵,谢谢青青鼓励:))
-得了吧-
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09/07/2009 postreply
15:53:20
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你的,唯美感觉, 唯美文字,还有唯美的心,得得,
-子衿青青-
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09/07/2009 postreply
16:57:03
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嘿,果酱果酱:))
-得了吧-
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09/07/2009 postreply
18:26:30
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