孩子是不是谈恋爱了？

最近写了一首歌，我看了歌词，就觉得丫头谈恋了，但是她打死不承认。大家看是不是我多疑了。

明天就要去录音棚了，看效果如何。

I'm stuck in my mind
There's nowhere to hide
Nowhere to flee
As far as I can see
I'm moving around
Slow and calm
But I'm afraid
Cause you are gone

Sub-Chorus

I try and reach out,
But you escape my touch
I'm stuck at the edge,
And I hate that so much

Chorus

You're within my reach
But I'm falling everyday
You're so near
And yet so far away
When I look up at the stars
And gaze at the dawn
I wonder how life would be
If I could just hold on

Verse 2

I'm caught in a lie
No right or wrong
But I know what's right
I will try to be strong
We can tie the string
Bury the hatch
Mend our troubles
Please, come back

Sub-Chorus

I try and reach out,
But you escape my touch
I'm stuck at the edge,
And I hate that so much

Chorus

You're within my reach
But I'm falling everyday
You're so near
And yet so far away
When I look up at the stars
And gaze at the coming dawn
I wonder how life would be
If I could just hold on

Bridge

I imagine a world
Where we don't fight
We are within reach
And you are in my sight
Hold on to me

Chorus x2 [Depends of change]

无论如何，我觉得歌词还是挺打动我的。

所有跟帖： 

• 写的不错 -非肥不可- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2017 postreply 00:52:08

• 可能是有动心的人了，但歌词或许也掺杂了一定的想象成分。 -soldanella- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2017 postreply 02:40:46

• 别问了，让孩子没有压力地自由创作。 -Francine- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2017 postreply 04:08:56

• +1。多好啊，多鼓励孩子～ -糖果果- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2017 postreply 05:42:55

• 写的不错 -tibuko- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2017 postreply 06:40:34

• 写得很好 -ZhangZhouDaTou- ♀ (58 bytes) () 10/18/2017 postreply 23:12:44