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To Whom It May Concern,

My daughter XXX is applying to attend XXX in the summer of 2018.

If I were to give a few words to say about XXX, I would say Straight, Strong, and Solid.

Whatever she undertakes she takes it seriously, be it academic studies, extra curriculum activities, or charity events. Her honesty, openness, and spirit of commitment and service won high respect from those she worked with.

She is interested in the Business program at XXX, an interest she has developed over the last few years in high school when she took related courses as well as a fun and inspiring experience last year at the XXX summer program. She wants to study finance and accounting, to follow her mom's step who had graduated from XXX with an MBA.

We have brought her to China to attend local schools for a couple of years. The experience not only gave her the ability to understand and use the language of the most populous country, but also the exposure about the importance to have an international perspective. This experience has proved to be helpful in the summer program she attended at  XXX where she provided help to attending international students.

As both of us are alumni of XXX (Ph. D  XXXX and MBA XXXX) we appreciate the excellent quality of education and conducive environment for personal development provided at the XXX.  In such environment a young women will mature, gain skills, and set on the right track to become a pillar of the community wherever she goes.  To this goal we believe she will succeed.

Sincerely,

.....

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You sure you want to use the word "Straight"? -N.- 给 N. 发送悄悄话 N. 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:18:33

+1 -Tufa- 给 Tufa 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:24:37

-古代的事物- 给 古代的事物 发送悄悄话 (206 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:20:35

Nice. Some minor corrections: -godog- 给 godog 发送悄悄话 (123 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:24:28

Thanks. Straight as in the Straightest Arrow. -borisg- 给 borisg 发送悄悄话 borisg 的博客首页 (53 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:28:57

direct? -古代的事物- 给 古代的事物 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:30:15

a little bit. A person who has a sense of honor and follows the -borisg- 给 borisg 发送悄悄话 borisg 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:35:19

象他们童子军那样,physically strong, (mentally awake), morally straight? -古代的事物- 给 古代的事物 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:51:31

Someone who is heterosexual is commonly referred to as straight -godog- 给 godog 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:34:40

Zan -travelworld- 给 travelworld 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 11:30:13

惭愧得紧呀! 当年娃跟俺要牛皮纸 -傻闷登儿- 给 傻闷登儿 发送悄悄话 (361 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 12:00:05

惭愧得紧啊,昨天娃让我帮他想有什么先进之处 -古代的事物- 给 古代的事物 发送悄悄话 (236 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 12:15:53

哈哈,俺邮轮都没坐过,俺这个爹就是不折不扣的第三世界。 -傻闷登儿- 给 傻闷登儿 发送悄悄话 (77 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 12:44:36

稍微改了一改。冒犯了。 -Francine- 给 Francine 发送悄悄话 Francine 的博客首页 (1825 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 12:16:56

赞,虽然你把人家的头韵给改没了。。。 -古代的事物- 给 古代的事物 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 12:19:15

没有最牛,只有更牛。 -傻闷登儿- 给 傻闷登儿 发送悄悄话 (149 bytes) () 11/20/2017 postreply 12:48:31

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