A Soldier's Elegy / 勇者挽歌 （Translated by Panzerkom/潘泽康译)

昨天有同学提到诗词的翻译。其实我也挺喜欢翻译诗词的，我个人的风格比较注重意境以及适当的压韵，让读者读起来也比较舒服。

以下这首＜勇者挽歌＞将作为丧礼系列的结尾。

A Soldier's Elegy
(by Mary Elizabeth Frye)
Do not stand at my grave and weep;
I am not there. I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow.
I am the diamond glints on snow.
I am the sunlight on ripened grain.
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning's hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circled flight.
I am the soft stars that shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry;
I am not there. I did not die.

勇者挽歌
（Translated by Panzerkom/潘泽康译)
不要在我坟前落泪，
我不在那儿，
我没有睡。
我化作了清风千缕，
我化作了白雪晶莹。
我是那阳光，
轻抚稻穗。
我是那秋雨，
拥抱着你。
我是清晨的鸟儿，
在你身旁纷飞。
我是晚空的繁星，
陪伴你入睡。
不要在我坟前哭泣，
我不在那儿，
我没有逝去。

所有跟帖： 

• 顶， 你翻译得真好 -潘泽康- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 12:37:50

• ... gimme my ID back >_< -panzerkom- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 12:39:47

• 给你了，检查你的qqh -潘泽康- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 12:52:42

• that's very nice of you. thank you. -panzerkom- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 12:57:03

• Its all good. -王失常- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 13:18:58

• 那么快就把密码换了。 -王失常- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 13:29:52

• of course :p -panzerkom- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 13:36:35

• 可惜王妹妹不跟我要她的爱地 -王失常- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 13:44:45

• ... i thought u ARE her... -panzerkom- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 14:45:08

• I bet "潘泽康" is a girl who has a crush on you -ghost_in_shell- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 12:58:51

• 过于敏感了 -王失常- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 13:19:43

• I guess a lot of chicks like you, both chinese MM and non-chines -ghost_in_shell- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 12:39:55

• thx for your kind words. just an okay number of chicks lah :p -panzerkom- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2009 postreply 12:42:19