This one is certainly an outstanding one. Gu's one is at the same level as it clearly showed who she is. The essay is to let the AO knows the specific/spike of the applicant; it is not for showing off writting skills. So no need to compare which one is better. The goal is to let the AO get touched.
college essay is not essay competition.
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• 这也是同个模式,从跑步讲到 challenges, struggles, and tribulations。以前有篇类似 -米汤- ♂ (340 bytes) () 02/26/2022 postreply 14:39:38
• I agree. Even the essay that won top price -Smart- ♂ (214 bytes) () 02/26/2022 postreply 14:45:04