Encourage her to write about her personal experience and activit

本帖于 2017-12-09 09:24:42 时间, 由普通用户 yude 编辑

Great job for a 13 year old.

Encourage her to write about her personal interactions with her teachers and classmates. Since the essay readers might be her teachers , PTA members, use specific school activity or teacher, or class as an example to stress a point.

 

Keep up.

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