I am not good at English either. Here are some errors I saw:
aware of, formally, around the world. "publicly" is not really necessary.
Also, "demand" is too strong a word for a company doing business with ABC. "Demand" ABC is OK.
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• Great,谢谢,学习了! -Wwonder- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/29/2013 postreply 15:57:10
• 跟着学习 -liveinca- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/29/2013 postreply 15:58:39
• 握手,咱们排排坐,做好学生! -Wwonder- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/29/2013 postreply 16:00:12