小女孩写的story

女儿7岁,暑假第一天没有summer camp, 跟我去上班, 特别烦躁,我让她写点什么, 她就在Ipad上敲了下面几篇. 她爸爸说写得乱七八糟的, 我觉得蛮有趣.

1.
Once upon a time there was a girl named Angelina. Her mom forced her to write a story so she wrote one. The End

2.
Once upon a time  there was a pretty girl named Lily . She was a poor girl in a dull dress that had worn out. One day she got money and she went out to buy stuff that she needed for herself. When she got there she realized that did not have enough money to buy anything. Then she saw someone giving out free stuff, she took some things and lived happily ever after. The End

3.
Once upon a time there was a girl named Zoey who was rich. One day she went fishing and lost all her money in the water. Zoey tried to catch her money but it started to rain and she could not catch her money so now she is poor. The End

4.
Once upon a time there was a girl named Emily. She was in college, she always had tests and always got a F- on it. The day before summer she had a test but this time she got a z-. When she was 100 years old  she was still in college. The End

5.
Once upon a time there was a girl named Mary. She loved to go and take a walk with her product a teddy bear. One day she did that and lost her product. She felt like she was going to cry for the rest of her life and she did. The End



 

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• 好 -pass2- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/02/2013 postreply 10:44:08

• 好玩，小家伙对钱很有意识。 -soundofsilence- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/02/2013 postreply 10:45:36

• 回复：好玩，小家伙对钱很有意识。 -又当爹来又当妈- ♀ (32 bytes) () 07/02/2013 postreply 10:50:11

• 很可爱。其实也可以看出来你们平时对她的教育^_^ -kitty_cat- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/02/2013 postreply 10:54:45

• 非常好，有想象力！ -兄贵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/02/2013 postreply 11:00:12